Formulaic "retro" synth work and misplaced juxtaposition regarding the samples. The rim shot sample feels like it's taking center stage on a rather cinematic string section while your square wave "leads" attempt to evoke notions of nostalgia. Honestly, the notes are well placed and hold a rather nice tune within the composition. It's just the fact that it all sounds quite cheap. Perhaps look into leveling and mastering a touch and pick up some sample packs designed for what you wish to produce. The drums toward the end of the work are unnecessary and totally jarring.

Pretty fancy smashed drum work on this one. I'm a big fan of smashed sounds. Well done on the whole composition coming from an old Angerfist fan!

Cheese synths, the vocals are nice at the end though.